Kia Ora Brianna, my name is Helen and I'm from Room 23 at Owairaka District School. I really liked your blog post about your camp poem. I also like the way that you put all the stuff that you enjoyed in your poem. I remember when you all went to camp, but I did not go to camp. To improve you could put some rhyming words in your poem. What was your favourite thing about writing this poem? Did you enjoy this? How long did it take to write this Poem?
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Kia Ora Brianna, my name is Helen and I'm from Room 23 at Owairaka District School. I really liked your blog post about your camp poem. I also like the way that you put all the stuff that you enjoyed in your poem. I remember when you all went to camp, but I did not go to camp. To improve you could put some rhyming words in your poem. What was your favourite thing about writing this poem? Did you enjoy this? How long did it take to write this Poem?
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Helen.
Hi Brianna I am Yasmin from room 24.I really really like your peopm it is fantastic!
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